aankhon mein aansoo hote hue bhi muskuraya hai maine.
ae zindagi har pal tera saath nibhaya hai maine.
meri har khwahish se muh moda tune.
mera dil har baar toda tune.
is dil ke tukdon ko sambhaala hai maine.
ae zindagi har pal tera saath nibhaya hai maine.
subah ki tamanna ko tu ne shaam di.
jahan dhoop ki chah thi wahan barsaat di.
mera har rasta badalwaya tune.
mere har hausale ko aazmaya tune.
phir bhi har kadam aage badhaya hai maine.
ae zindagi har pal tera saath nibhaya hai maine.
aaj..
aaj tu mujhe chhod ke ja rahi hai?
meri rukti hui saanso mein muskura rahi hai?
jo bhi hai tu, mujhe teri aadat ho gayi.
tere nakhron ki, dikaton ki chahat ho gayi.
aur aaj jab mein palat ke dekhti hun..
ae zindagi har pal mujhe sawara tha tune.
Hello!!!
- Abhirama
- Mumbai, India
- I have got a secret ambition to die of exhaustion rather than boredom..
2 comments:
Beautiful... just like u...
yesss, these were the first words that came to my mind when i read it. i was nearly in tears as i read it d first time, but as usual they did manage to tease me and ran back inside. now i read d poem again and am tryin to blend my feelings of that day n today... hmmm.... well, having apparently known you and your flight to the skies of today i did manage to read between the lines; felt each word magnificently emote the life that you put into dem wen u penned them. they seemed animated with life. it was like they were conveying more meaning than what they were assigned to.
this seemingly innocent poem has a lot to tell to those who wish to patiently listen. U'll find a whole lot of people giving u gyaan on - do this to lead a better life, these are the dos n donts to a successful life, blah blah n more blah.... all this mite be true but it lacks the simplicity, depth and shear beauty that these words drawn by u have yaara. they paint hues of spiritual origin on which volumes could be written, and yet u dont need to write those volumes...
they store a treasure to living a life how HE wanted us to live, and only those who have the passion to find the treasure shall be rewarded by it...
yaara, all i want to say is
to others its just a poem, but to some its.... zindagi...
Wow.. i guess its rare to have a comment longer then the blog itself!!
Thanks dude!!
I can say just one thing..
Beauty that you are talking about actually lies in the mind of the reader..
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